Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?
During the time in university, some students choose to stay with their family whereas others decide to live apart from their close relatives. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of each option.
To begin with, there are one main benefit and a downside of living with parents when studying at university. The good side is that students would have more time to interact with their family members after school. They, therefore, will build up a stronger family bond than those who live in a different place. In Vietnam, for example, surveys show that college students feel more connected to their families when staying at home as they can share and get advice from other family members for any experiences at school. However, choosing to live with family may decrease students’ social connection. Going home after finishing studying means that people will have less time to hang out with peers resulting in a poorer social experience.
Likewise, living separately from families brings a merit and poses a big problem to students at the same time. The huge advantage of this tendency is that it will give the students more private space to do whatever they like and desire without any interference from their parents. This means that individuals will have more freedom in their lifestyle. For instance, many students have said that they are completely free to participate in extreme sports after moving out of their parents’ house. Before that, they have been under some control and restrictions of their families. Unfortunately, university students will have to face some monetary issues when they live outside of their families’ house. Although most tuition fees are covered by their parents, the expenses such as accommodation and their pastimes are students’ personal matters to deal with by themselves.
In conclusion, there are advantage and disadvantage of each choice that the young have to consider carefully at the time they go to the university.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, may, so, therefore, whereas, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19626168224 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70543484923 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557632398754 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9765067727 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304462119037 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106862675207 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574953088395 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180359032238 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077209277505 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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