You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:
Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.
State what your skills and experience are.
Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my interest in collaborating with your organization. It indeed is a very noble cause in helping the weaker sections of the society and your organization, Cultural Expeditions is doing exceptional job. I would find myself worthy if I get an opportunity to help you as a volunteer.
As per the information gathered from your website, the next project your team is working on is to educate the kids of the slums in Dharavi, India. I am an English graduate and I have always believed in uplifting the society by ensuring that a basic education is provided to every person. I have in past done few small projects with many Non profit organizations, where I had the pleasure to pass on my acquired knowledge to others. In my opinion, my degree, experience and strong willingness to volunteer in your next project will be the perfect match.
I would consider this gesture as my way to give it back to society. This may increase the chances that someday someone may just think like me and the chain will continue. Together, it will be better society to live in if everyone cares about their surroundings. I also believe that with basic education, the kids will grow as a responsible citizens and will engage themselves in skilled activities which can help them stay competitive in today's world.
As a part of corporate social responsibility, my employer allows me to take leave of 45 days in a year. I would wish to redeem all my leaves towards your upcoming project. Kindly let me know the process way forward. Will wait for your positive response. Thank you.
Yours Faithfully
ABC
- You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:Explain why you want to do the voluntary wo 73
- You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:Explain why you want to do the voluntary wo 78
- You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:Explain why you want to do the voluntary wo 86
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 937.175257732 144% => OK
No of words: 281.0 206.0 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79003558719 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84326715833 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 127.690721649 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626334519573 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 290.88556701 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4245212269 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.125 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107277626061 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404195570042 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481252073089 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665806567146 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443225443291 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 41.2886597938 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.