Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important
characteristics for a politician or leader is good communication ability.
The most important characteristics of a politician have always been a controversial issue among politician writers. While some people believe that, good communication ability of politician is the most important attribute for him/her, there are others holding the view that other features like as management, bravery are more important than communication ability. As far as I am concerned, a politician should gather all these abilities together if he wants to be a successful politician. I will vindicate my standpoint hereunder.
The first point that juts out of the mind is the face that politicians are always faced with many situations that should have ability to sort them according their importance. ability to manage all issues in a limit of time that he has is one of the most important attribute that they must have. An example can illustrate this. Imagine you are Minister of Foreign Affairs of a country and many meetings and conferences are under way around the world. you should be able to following all of them and know which one of them is more important and practical for your country.
The second point that is worth considering is the fact that a politician should analysis and make decision in critical situation. he may have good communication to talk about but could not select the best choice among them. Besides after that you found the best one, you should be brave to apply it and be responsible about your choice. On the other hand, with a low communication ability may be you miss some chance, but if you did not choice best solution, this might have bad effect on your people. Consequently, for a politician to be brave, analysis problem and make decision have more effect on his people than his communication ability.
To make a long story short, many characteristics should have a politician like as communication ability, management, bravery, analysis situation and so on. but among them some of them have more effect on his people. As said above in my view there are more important attributes than communication ability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ability
...o sort them according their importance. ability to manage all issues in a limit of time...
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Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...erences are under way around the world. you should be able to following all of them...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...nd make decision in critical situation. he may have good communication to talk abo...
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Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
... hand, with a low communication ability may be you miss some chance, but if you did no...
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Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...of them have more effect on his people. As said above in my view there are more im...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, if, may, second, so, while, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00581395349 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92116884487 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491279069767 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 565.2 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8339109956 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.294117647 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224439903087 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721087016885 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499686948333 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145691419368 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403331024117 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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