It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do your agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
Undoubtedly, lessons that learns at an early age remains life time. However, to teach right or wrong is one of the essential lesson. Although some people assert that punishment is necessary in order to failed in distinctive behavior which helps them to be more focus. As far as I am concern, measure like this would probably be increased the chance of stubbornness in children. To large extent, I believe that punishment is not only way to teach the child there should be another ways that will be discussed in this essay.
Generally, a children learn behavior form their family. Therefore, it’s necessary to parents to behave nicely in-front of their child. Likewise a teacher should create a friendly environment among the students, avoid as much punishment, Moreover, parents should organize family dinner or get together to make their children more sociable. Along with it, in case of any mishap, trust on your children and teach them nicely rather than strictness. It will create a trust bond between parent and child. A friendly and healthy environment family impact the positive influence on the children behavior.
On the other hand, punishment sometimes influence negatively, sometimes. Children, for example, could become a stubborn and could also lose their confidence as well. Many Psychologist argue that strictness and punishment makes children lonely and children could be suffered from low self-steam. Consequently, it could deteriorate their personalities and career as well. Thus, it is necessary for parents to avoid punishment. Act affects more rather than words.
In last, to teach the children ,it necessary for both parent and teacher to become a role model for a children, so that they follow your act not your words. However, to set the example have more applicable than to give the example.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24149659864 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76193198941 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578231292517 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4663365118 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1052631579 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4736842105 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268635729993 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727296668676 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466792476475 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14987319145 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502091907061 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.