There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
The music industry is growing faster than ever before with a diverse collection of genres for people of all ages and gender. However, the questions about the necessity of music and the importance of traditional music in today society are still unanswered to many people. Personally, I belives that music is crucial to human in some several key aspects and we should put a larger emphasis on the importance of our traditional music.
It is an undeniable fact that music could evoke different kinds of feelings and emotions in people. Research has shown that by listening to songs that are happy and bright, people get happier and perform better in several cognitive tasks. On top of that, upbeat and hard-hitting music could significantly enhance athletes performance in stressful circumstances. It almost seems like some part of our brain are being programmed to be more sensitive with certain patterns of beat and melodies, which could greatly explain why we love it so much.
With the instinct to appreciate music naturally, people are paying more and more attention to the music industry. However, the ongoing process of globalization has flooded the market with international pop music and made people forget about their own traditional music. In my opinion, it is vital to preserve our traditional folk songs and melodies not only because of their historical values but also to show our unique culture to the world. In addition, if each culture contributes to the global library of songs and melodies, the music will be richer and much more diverse than ever before.
In conclusion, I truly believe that human has evolved both physically and emotionally to have a natural sense of appreciation to music. However, it is strikingly important to put an emphasis on the roles of traditional music, which to me, is an effective way to improve the music that we already love.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd much more diverse than ever before. In conclusion, I truly believe that human ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of traditional music, which to me, is an effective way to improve the music that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02564102564 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78157859626 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.2493557842 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 120.615384615 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447354878885 0.244688304435 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166899739819 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104349495625 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279423804867 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922099226905 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.