Some people prefer hobbies that require technology, while some people hobbies does not require technology.
Discuss the both views and give your opinion.
Hobbies play a pivotal role in shaping a human personality. In this era of globalization, a constant effort is being laid not only on tertiary education but also on developing hobbies which help children to be successful in professional front. While some people prefer hobbies that need technology and some choose to have hobbies without technology intervention. I will elucidate both sides in the below paragraphs and put forward my opinion.
First and foremost since we live in an era of digitization and technology has played a critical role in shaping it and thus a majority of people have become interdependent on it. This interdependency has brought a plethora of changes in human behaviour and some people have embraced the fact that they must have hobbies which must be dependent on technology. Over the last decade, it is common to see in different age groups of people being influenced by various modes of technology like television, Playstations, Mobile phones and the internet. Hence it is led to an addiction which has led many people to make it their hobby. In a recent survey done by the Economic Times in India, it was seen that around eighty percent of the people want to have hobbies related technology like the internet as they believe that it helps them at their professional career in the longer run.
On the other hand, we see people who are exactly opposite and want to have hobbies like swimming, hiking, reading books in which technology doesn't have a role to play perhaps because the interests of some humans are varied and they want to have a minimum intervention of technology in their lives. In my own personal experience in my school, many kids used to choose sports as their hobby as they found myriad of reasons to avoid hobbies related to technology as they felt bored.
Thus in my view, I would conclude by saying that different people have different hobbies and it really depends on their likes and dislikes and what goals they want to achieve on the personal and professional front.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, really, so, thus, while, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8612716763 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75890328368 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508670520231 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3837212598 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.166666667 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242949711494 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996412980068 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810174287404 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1614154538 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632978684817 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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