As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
Besides earning profit, which is the most essential factor to maintain a business, I strongly agree that enterprises should have a socially responsible manner.
It’s apparent that making money is the most important part of a company. When a company makes effort to earn a large amount of money, their profit will increase. As a result, they have to pay more taxes which contributes to its country. Thanks for those taxes, the authority can improve local people’s conditions and reconstruct the nation. In addition, when a firm earn lots of money that means the company is prospected. The company becomes bigger and bigger and it can provide more jobs for people which reduces the unemployment.
Although making money is important, having social responsibilities are necessary. If a corporation only cares about the profit, it’ll do harm for the social. For example, releasing raw right into the environment doesn’t take as much money as controlling it before disposing. It can have a bad influence on the company in a long term. Moreover, they should do some charity project to boost their reputation.
In conclusion, it’s important for a business to both make money and have social responsibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27040816327 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07037323384 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627551020408 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5206147094 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.4615384615 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262748645187 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992522223957 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098172304606 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193875616614 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101440009162 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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