Mothers play key roles in upbringing of children. But in the recent times both parents are getting busy with professional life. Who in your opinion should take care of the responsibility of children care now? Give your opinion.
There is a great responsibility of upbringing children, in this case both members of family have equal duties in upbringing of their child. Despite educating their child, parents have more focused on their job career, as a result immatures are growing up without their parents.
Firstly, if we look back on the past, most families head was father and only they were allowed to work. Providing that females were only housewives, being busy with looking after the children and their husbands, as a consequence of this most immatures took more disciplines or education from their family instead of school. This kind of generation knows the value of family and of course their parents.
Secondly, today's generation is being brought up mostly by babysitters, but not with parents. Parents want to do what their children are willing that is why they work, another reason is that communicating for single person's salary might not be enough for one family, for that reason females began to work for their future generation hiring a person who looks after their children. This is a main point why children suffer parents' care. So " women are better off in the house" is no longer true.
In conclusion, If one person is gifted naturally to play vital role in society, it is her duty to thrive in it. I wish the government would give more extra time for both parents to be with their children in their leisure time.
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- Ielts 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, kind of, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85950413223 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53193522641 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607438016529 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.660660323 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.909090909 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151884758786 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662095085941 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660155331412 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103722781034 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463217709222 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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