You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
Give details of your study plans
Explain why you want to get a part-time job
Suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Mark,
How have you been?. It has been a long time since we last met. I have good news to share that I will be moving to Sydney next month for pursuing higher studies.
It's a One-year masters course in Biotechnology at North Cap University followed by an internship of six months at Cipla. I believe this is a golden opportunity for me to gain overseas exposure. Apart from being excited, I am nervous too as this will be my first time to Australia but I am hopeful that you will be able to guide me.
As you are aware of my family financial condition is not great and the tuition fee I need to pay for this course is hefty. I don't want to put this burden on my parents thus I would need your help to introduce me to some local consultants who can help me to find some part-time jobs. this will help me to not only pay my tuition fee but also pay for my local expenses here till the time I graduate and start work full-time.
I look forward to your response and seeing you soon.
Yours loving
Derrick
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mark, How have you been?. It has been a long t...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... month for pursuing higher studies. Its a One-year masters course in Biotechnol...
^^^
Line 6, column 126, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...need to pay for this course is hefty. I dont want to put this burden on my parents t...
^^^^
Line 6, column 247, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
...ce me to some local consultants who can help me to find some part-time jobs. this will help me ...
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Line 6, column 284, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...an help me to find some part-time jobs. this will help me to not only pay my tuition...
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Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onse and seeing you soon. Yours loving Derrick
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, so, thus, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22564102564 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31664360808 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.124875417 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9090909091 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210559801398 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867241983622 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699826583301 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137112302744 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663539221743 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.