Youngsters nowadays prefer to live on their own and leave their families. Is this a positive or a negative development?
Today’s young people are ambition to live alone away from the control of their families. It is beneficial for anyone to dream of starting a personal life and depend only on himself taking the responsibilities for his own life, but is it advantageous for every one? Or the idea can contain some disadvantages as well.
During our childhood, we have been dreaming about the day that we will become an independent personality and act like father or mother.
On one hand, this need may become the motivation for a personality that likes to be a value added to the society. This would be a starting point for such person to create a successful life. On the other hand, there another type of people who wants to live without any supervision in order to create an irresponsible way of life that usually ends by a crisis. According to an article which was published in New York time in, 2003 that 30% of teenagers who prefer to leave their families and live alone have no future plans to execute in the future. This shows that supervision should not be removed form children life until they are fully aware about how they can be responsible and productive otherwise, this unplanned freedom will result in an increase in youth crimes number, referring to the same article.
At the end, it highly recommended to prepare our youth for such transition in their life as well as teach them the meaning of responsibility in order to have the benefit of their ambition in our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 23, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended preparing'.
Suggestion: recommended preparing
...he same article. At the end, it highly recommended to prepare our youth for such transition in their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71042471042 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72865641086 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606177606178 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1709898563 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161210965632 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617660098271 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059857737214 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871149182104 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506766657551 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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