Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?
Selecting a particular field in the early twenties is a norm today, which leads to sense of fulfillment in the future, as believed by some. I completely agree with this assertion and will present reasons for my stand point with other factors which contribute further in this achievement, in the below paragraphs.
Firstly, choosing a career and then practicing it in practical life help a person becoming an expert in that specific area. In other words, experience teach a person to understand complexities relating to that profession which eventually lead to smooth work performance and relief in life. This difference could clearly be seen in a fresh-starter who has to work hard to accomplish a goal, and a professional who perform the same work without any hesitation in no time. Secondly, Staying in the career steer a person to a stabilized job early in the career. For example, lucrative jobs are offered to professionals by the companies with handsome salaries, secure and permanent job, and health insurance. These opportunities are never offered to trainees.
Coming toward the other elements which could culminates in pleasurable occupation, I believe that structured organization could play an important role in provision of that. As these have defined hierarchies which allocate specific job description to every employee, limiting the over-burdening of work. For example, multi-national companies like Nestle have specific jobs for employees rather than local food companies, which assign more work leading to mental stress. Furthermore, I think that we should choose a work-line for which we are passionate about rather than preferring money-making jobs. This gives meaning to life and a purpose to live.
In conclusion, I completely agrees with the statement that career should be chosen and kept from the start and other factors like company’s structure and passion ought to be considered before involving.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'culminate'
Suggestion: culminate
...g toward the other elements which could culminates in pleasurable occupation, I believe th...
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Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'agree'
Suggestion: agree
...o live. In conclusion, I completely agrees with the statement that career should b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40264026403 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08167422163 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60396039604 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4103737137 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.928571429 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193177951159 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667847442589 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462701423044 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11096764085 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314485407219 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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