The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
authority plays a very important role in developing its province. Since many countries in the world are democratic, which implies that a leader or authority is selected by the people. Therefore people also play an important role in the development of the province. There will be a significant development if the people under the authority question the authority for its actions.
Firstly, if the society has to improve then it is important for the authority and its people to go hand in hand. This can be accomplished by people questioning the authority for its action so that people can know the point of view of the authority and can also collaborate with the authority to see effective results. For instance after demonetization in India people questioned the authority for its action, when they came to know the reason behind it that is to reduce corruption people felt right and began to support the government.
also, in order to get work done effectively and on time it is necessary for the people to question them so that the work can be finished on time with effective results.For instance, suppose in a society if the authority decides to build a road and leaves that in middle people of that respective society can question the authority in order to get the work done.
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- The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and s 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Authority
authority plays a very important role in developi...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...t and began to support the government. also, in order to get work done effectively ...
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Suggestion: For
...finished on time with effective results.For instance, suppose in a society if the a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, then, therefore, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 2235.4752809 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 220.0 442.535393258 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84545454545 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.813911721 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 215.323595506 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481818181818 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 704.065955056 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.8391937029 60.3974514979 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.25 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.21951772744 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194942531539 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101061932792 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322724518671 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140804488308 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221299598032 0.0667264976115 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 100.480337079 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.