it is important to instill competition rather cooperation to succeed
competition or cooperation
competition and cooperation are part of our lives. We quite often observe and experience both behaviors and unequivocally, both have contributed in the development of individuals and societies.
for instance, market competition motivate companies to innovate and we receive multiple new options. however, ability to cooperate and share is extremely important to live in a society
as social being. I would endorse that necessity of cooperation when we talk about individual and collective success and accomplishment.
Man is a sentient as well as social being. The superior social behavior of man has led to development of language and other communal activities. It is the unique feature of human
race that we collectively made endeavor to develop our groups, tribes and societies for ages. The journey of human development is still continue. Cooperation is the theme of contemporary mutual and interdependent wold.
Business, companies and countries cannot not operate in isolation. They need to join hands with friends and foes for mutual gains. The global supply chain has increasingly become
fragmented and spread across borders. The product manufacturing and production has become global. The different production stages are performed in different countries. For instance, idea is conceive and researched by company in one country,
its parts are produced in other country, assembling and packaging is done in third place. The companies and countries have to follow new business and trade norms to make their
products competative in the market.
Furthemore, in the field of science and technology "open innovation" is a buzzword now a day. There was a time when companies used to keep their secrete research outcomes close to themselves, however, now they
pool their resoureces for reciprocal benefits. The new innovation model not only reduced production cost but minimized the duplication of efforts in reinventint the wheel.
On the other hand, competition is an innate instinct. Every one has some sense of competition even we compete with ourselves by comparing our
present with the past. The sence of competition has also contributed in the survival and development of human race as we competed with other
species and among ourselves to bring out the best of us. nevertheless, competition is more about wining and losing, success and failure and self verses others. The outcomes of competition along with success and failure is not always positive.
In its extreme form of competition is likely to hinder not only epistemic learning but also emotional growth. For in classroom competition, the emphasize is more to finish early
than to learn proper steps. At times there comes a stage when one wants to succeed at any cost, the negative tendencies like ego, selfishness dominates and it becomes nearly impossible to accept one's own failure or other's success.
At tender stage, competition may make the winner to view his fellows inferior. In long run the students also become afraid of being failed.
In the essence, it would endorse that the positive outcomes of competition overweight its repercussions on the individuals and societies. It is far more better to educate individuals to cooperate with each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...duals to cooperate with each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, third, well, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 14.8657303371 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 33.0 12.9106741573 256% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2793.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 513.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44444444444 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04705861304 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541910331384 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 888.3 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6383345712 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.28125 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.03125 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.97078651685 382% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169137859763 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425415524791 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665520877322 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678178306294 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100848250957 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 100.480337079 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.