People produce more garbage than in the past. Explain how it is affecting us and the measures that could be taken to address the situation.
In the present time, the waste levels are rising every day in the social environment as compared to the past. in the future, it will have adverse effects on the ecosystem. the time has come to pay dier attention to this life-threatening issue. In this essay, the impacts and the possible solution will be discussed in the following paragraphs in detail.
The personal health is deteriorating and the spread of infections through the air is very prominent in the developing countries. The rise in the garbage level from households, industries is creating deadly habitat to live. the realise of chemicals in the rivers is contaminating the fresh water. In addition to that, the household plastic is not limiting anyhow and landfills of garbage yards are heaping up that's becoming the centre point of infection spread. People working on these fields have often complained about the suffocation due to rise in these elements. The majority the developing countries are unable to discard garbages to such a level, which results in the possibility of infections
Awareness in between individuals about the outcome of their waste is necessary. The education to the people on contaminating the environment is pivotal to realise them about the repercussions of such hazards in the society. Moreover, the government should take responsibility to take a step by generating guidelines through the judicial system in the form of law. The strict laws must be amended everywhere to control the waste limits especially from the processing industries, which are major contaminators and offenders must be fined.
In conclusion, it is irrefutable that unwanted products are getting accumulated in the environment and the adverse impacts of this on human health has been observed with the rise in the sickness. Individuals are required to get aware about the consequences to take precautionary measures. Furthermore, law agencies must control this by making rules and regulations.
- Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities To what extent do you agree 70
- Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online. Discuss both views and giver your opinion. 61
- The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people think the government is wasting money on science and this money could better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Some people think it is better for a children to grow in a city while others think that life in a countryside is more suitable What are the advantages and disadvantages in both places 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...al environment as compared to the past. in the future, it will have adverse effect...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... have adverse effects on the ecosystem. the time has come to pay dier attention to ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ies is creating deadly habitat to live. the realise of chemicals in the rivers is c...
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Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ies is creating deadly habitat to live. the realise of chemicals in the rivers is contamina...
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Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ndfills of garbage yards are heaping up thats becoming the centre point of infection ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3108974359 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08316507617 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554487179487 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9374565368 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0674186466122 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0191535524577 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0198949452265 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0361072628282 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215444533082 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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