Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, education has become a vital role in deciding the aspects of one's career. Few individuals believe that university graduates are ought to study subjects of their choice, whilst, rest of people think they should pursue their education in the field of science and technology, which will help them in forthcoming. In my perspective, I certainly believe it is up to the students to decide which area they want to specialize in.
There are numerous of factors, why it is a good idea for pupils to choose their own path. Firstly, some people are born with a talent and thus they start showcasing their interest in that subject. For example, Srinivasa Ramanujan started his affection towards math’s at his young age and later he invented many theorems and the number 0. Finally, students educating in the different fields will have eco-balance in the society. For instance, some students wanted to be a director, so they tend to take a course in media, few will have an ambition to be an accountant, so undertake accountancy subject. Thus, it will create a balance in society among all the professionals.
Having said that, there are several pros, why pursuing a career in tech and science would be beneficial. For instance, there will be a demand in jobs in upcoming decades, as the technology evolves drastically. Example, Gartner report says there will be 2 million skilled shortage in the area of cyber security. Furthermore, people working in this area expertise earn an ample amount salary and leads a luxury life. A case in point, a recent study says that professionals like scientist, engineers, and doctors earn double the wages of other skilled labors.
To conclude, some individuals urge that students have the freedom to choose their studies, while others think they should study only subjects that will help them in upcoming. In my opinion, I think it in the hands of students to think and decide. However, there are other metrics they should consider before choosing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...a vital role in deciding the aspects of ones career. Few individuals believe that un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03012048193 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71646672438 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569277108434 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2995520886 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2352941176 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353536856616 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960697459439 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080699379361 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210154241897 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068461406017 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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