Some people think that teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?
there are lots of people who think that history is one of the most important subjects in school, however, some other people believe that science and technology are more important than history.
people who claim that history is one of the most important disciplines believed that history has equal important with some other essential subjects such as management because history plays an important role of development of society. For example, when government makes a decision or a policy usually depends on the not only result of poll but also historical events, cases and data. Thus, the extent of proficiency of history influence the methodology of someone, government and country, and school need to teach their students history well for society.
While some other people suggest that science and technology are more important than history. The reason is that modern need more science and technology talents to make more new hi-tech devices to make people have better life. Moreover, there are more and more technology companies appear so science talents can find a job easier than people who majors in history.
In my opinion, history has equal status with subjects like science and technology because history is useful as science. history is not limited to do a job regarding to archaeology. history can provide reference. For instance, management and science both have history so the modern studies can be guided more or less by history. Including scientists, they also need to study learn history of particular field and extract experience from history.
Overall, learning history is necessary for students although someone who would like to be scientist also needs to learn history.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33579335793 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5773316256 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505535055351 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6079021825 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.230769231 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0766955537418 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033926476729 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285918679249 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0522031545097 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224345907729 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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