It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer
The shopping center will certainly attract more people around my neighborhood and also it will generate more job opportunities with many stores in it. It is going to be an excellent deal to develop it nearby my house and I do support of the plan of building it around my community.
First, it is going to be easier and faster to buy goods. For example, I will not need to take my car to go to the shopping, instead I will have to do is only go on foot. Besides, it will make me save money with some car expenses or other issues which my car may have. Then, I will save time and money with it.
Second, there is going to be created many job opportunities in my community. The unemployee rate is very high and with the development of the shopping, it will probably vanish and people will start to have a better life. In addition, people will enjoy living. For instance, they will have vacation that they can plan to travel or do other activities.
However, there are not enough spaces to construct such a huge shopping center. My neighborhood is almost entirely fulfilled with houses and builds and what it is left, it remains as green places. Under these conditions it may not be able to build the shopping center.
Finally, building a huge shopping center will increase job opportunities, improve the people's life and help to accomplish tasks faster.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...increase job opportunities, improve the peoples life and help to accomplish tasks faste...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 244.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55327868852 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58375881115 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532786885246 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6814849375 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3571428571 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111894055573 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461289315038 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427243389049 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07350102709 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416529171923 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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