You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with the flight, but didn’t like services at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say
– Give your flight details.
– Why were you disappointed?
– Suggest some improvements to the airport services.
Dear Sir / Madam
I had a business trip last week from Dubai to Paris using AirArbia air lines as always. You are one of the best enterprises known by your pilots proficiency and hospitality of the staff. The flight was relaxing and flawless.I am writing this letter unfortunately,to complain about the services at the airport.
I was exasperate from the long waiting queues to board where only few counters were open to work. The employees were unhelpful and not conscientious.I was waiting more than thirty minutes to weight and board, when the employee carelessly informed me that she entered the wrong data and had to restart. Nevertheless,at my arrival,I found my luggage's wheels were completely damaged which indicated the awful way the bags were managed.
In the scope of all these incidents, I am sure you will tackle the problems soon. I suggest opening more counters at bustling times. I suggest an apprenticeship to new workers , ultimately the company will gain skillful workers. More cameras installed to monitor the labourer work and a cut down from their salary for any damaged luggage.
Air Arabia reputation and excellency are non-questionable. I am sure you will response promptly.
Thanks for your time.
Yours Faithfully
Engy Saeed
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir / Madam I had a bu...
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Dear Sir / Madam I had a business trip last week fro...
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...ai to Paris using AirArbia air lines as always. You are one of the best enterprises kn...
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...f. The flight was relaxing and flawless.I am writing this letter unfortunately,to...
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...s.I am writing this letter unfortunately,to complain about the services at the airp...
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...n about the services at the airport. I was exasperate from the long waiting ...
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...rvices at the airport. I was exasperate from the long waiting queues to board w...
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...es were unhelpful and not conscientious.I was waiting more than thirty minutes to...
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...ng data and had to restart. Nevertheless,at my arrival,I found my luggages wheels w...
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...d to restart. Nevertheless,at my arrival,I found my luggages wheels were completel...
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...he awful way the bags were managed. In the scope of all these incidents, I ...
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...re counters at bustling times. I suggest an apprenticeship to new workers , ultim...
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...uggest an apprenticeship to new workers , ultimately the company will gain skillf...
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...heir salary for any damaged luggage. Air Arabia reputation and excellency ar...
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...ny damaged luggage. Air Arabia reputation and excellency are non-questi...
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... am sure you will response promptly. Thanks for your time. Yours F...
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...promptly. Thanks for your time. Yours Faithfully Engy Saeed ...
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...ur time. Yours Faithfully Engy Saeed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
nevertheless, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45588235294 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96051242211 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.710784313725 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.447688372 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 4.34317383033 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195031656912 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556934243688 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497967121031 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738267213233 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624374317317 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.