You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment, explain how this problem is affecting your work
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have been one of your regular customer for two years. However, I am writing this to inform you about a defect in a router that I purchased from one of your department store in Colombo.
Last Saturday I bought a router from your shop and I was assured that it was one of among the best which has fast 4G internet connection. Despite, upon arrival I realized that it is not as fast as it was supposed to be. In addition, eventhough it is said that 10 GB data slot is provided, once I started to work,it seemed very slow and just five days after prevailing balance bundle was only 1GB.
As I am working at home, sending of e-mail in daily basis is required. Hence, fast internet facility is crucial in my career. Due to this reason, I am so likely to miss my deadlines which adversely effect on my job prospects.
Therefore,could you please send some technician to check the issue with my equipment? Given the fact that this foul-up was entirely fault of your company,I feel that compensation in the form of a full refund, if you could not settle the issue quickly.
A swift response would be greatly appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
Sara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...slot is provided, once I started to work,it seemed very slow and just five days aft...
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Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h adversely effect on my job prospects. Therefore,could you please send some tec...
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Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , could
...fect on my job prospects. Therefore,could you please send some technician to chec...
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Line 9, column 133, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'faulted'.
Suggestion: faulted
...the fact that this foul-up was entirely fault of your company,I feel that compensatio...
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Line 9, column 154, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...ul-up was entirely fault of your company,I feel that compensation in the form of a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57819905213 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62355559438 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658767772512 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6218606226 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197189744624 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671807366003 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494224476683 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865490945368 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059786709624 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.