Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. Your opinion? Good or Bad.
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Nowadays our society develops fast day by
day this is including our shopping style is change. Therefore, people pursue
fast and convenient shopping routing, it makes large shopping malls are more
important in our life. For another, the small business is shrinking out from
the market, because of less choice or unstable price and so on. In this
article, I will discuss both reasons and make a personal conclusion.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">At the begin, what kind of benefit if have
the shopping mall near our house? As we know the large shopping centre has a
combination of the shops as a result, we can easy shopping, enjoy a clean
shopping environment, convenient, have organized car park and others. In short,
a large shopping centre does provide people with an easy life.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">There is also, the small shops are
decreasing in our life now, the reason that shopping in small shops has a limit
choice, even more, the price is higher than the large market. In addition,
previously shopping routing cannot make customers feel satisfied, since, people
like to fast and easy shopping way.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Follow the reason above, large shopping
status is replacing the small market, because,
people can have more enjoyable shopping in a large mall. In my opinion,
a large shopping center is very important in my life, it is good to have a
shopping mall near my house. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Nowadays our society develops fast day by day this is including our shopping style is change. Therefore, people pursue fast and convenient shopping routing, it makes large shopping malls are more important in our life. For another, the small business is shrinking out from the market, because of less choice or unstable price and so on. In this article, I will discuss both reasons and make a personal conclusion.
At the begin, what kind of benefit if have the shopping mall near our house? As we know the large shopping centre <span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="centre ">has a combination</span> of the shops as a result, we can easy shopping, enjoy a clean shopping environment, convenient, have organized car park and others. In short, a large shopping centre does <span class="hiddenSuggestion" pre="does ">provide</span> people with an easy life.
There is also, the small shops are decreasing in our life now, the reason that shopping in small shops has a limit choice, even more, the price is higher than the large market. In addition, previously shopping routing cannot make customers feel satisfied, since, people like to fast and easy shopping way.
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| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-08-12 | hitakshi patel | 61 | view |
| 2023-04-27 | Radhika Chopra | 61 | view |
| 2023-02-23 | aleema | 56 | view |
| 2023-02-23 | aleema | 61 | view |
| 2023-02-22 | whatever | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, in addition, in short, kind of, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4811.0 1615.20841683 298% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 617.0 315.596192385 196% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.79740680713 5.12529762239 152% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98392262146 4.20363070211 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.82611570576 2.80592935109 279% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.374392220421 0.561755894193 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1179.9 506.74238477 233% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 14.0 2.52805611222 554% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 413.794088285 49.4020404114 838% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 240.55 106.682146367 225% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 30.85 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 83.0 4.38176352705 1894% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158724865669 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119322051082 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859502578208 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0342297504036 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723380828418 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.7 13.0946893788 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.65 50.2224549098 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 28.55 12.4159519038 230% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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