As cities expanding, some people claim governments should look forward creating better networks of public transportation available for everyone rather than building more roads for vehicle owning population. What’s your opinion? Give some examples or experience to support.
A matter of considerable controversy at present it is issue either government build more roads or public transport. After studying both side point, I will give my opinion in below essay.
To begin with, now day’s traffic is a most headache problem of regime as well as normal people. In my prospective system should take care of vehicle owning as well as road creating process need to improve. Many people spending their daily 2 to 4 hours of precious time on road due to jam. it is impacting on their individual's performance in office also they are facing health problems, like migraine, headache, body pain, spine or back pain and most of them are not mentally fit. Administrator has to take decision to solve the general problems of people and help them with all necessary facilities without any hesitation. In linked to that, everyone wanting his/her own car for travelling it may be the distance not long but they want it. Almost each and every person wishing he have own bike with luxuries facilities.
Considering another side of topic is, each of us dreaming own vehicle or owner of it and they are not caring about the traffic or nature issues. Regime is doing their best and we have to involve in it and get the rid of it. Government have lot of work to do however, we have to look into this for solution.
In conclusion, we can say that, all's well that ends well, each one of us have to to take initiative towards the better. Government has to work on both issues mentioned in above but subject to criticality and requirement of particular time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...rs of precious time on road due to jam. it is impacting on their individuals perfo...
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Line 3, column 786, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...Almost each and every person wishing he have own bike with luxuries facilities. ...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...ell that ends well, each one of us have to to take initiative towards the better. Gov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, may, so, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 31.9359605911 153% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67870036101 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61120907926 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642599277978 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6850734187 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5714285714 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165609987822 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515736625871 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461629215907 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930418148608 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456142241145 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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