You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
1. Thank you friend for the holiday
2. Explain that you left your wallet in their house
3. give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Hi Sam,
Last visit at your place was extremely memorable and overwhelming. it wouldn't have been better if you didn't took a leave for a week as well. this was one of the best vacation i have ever enjoyed so much with so much fun and frolic.
Indeed we should often plan a holiday at each other's place to explore and unwind. hoping to see you soon at my place and allow me to host and explore the city altogether. When i came back home with all the memorable time spend together, I realised that have forgotten the wallet at your house. my wallet color is brown with brand name of "Esbeda" which is a gift given by my parents this birthday to me. Thus, its special for me. it would be nice of you if you can send the wallet through mail at earliest.
I'm relieved with the fact that I forgot the wallet at your place and not loosing it. As this wallet is special gifts there are many important cards, driving license and cash of $ 10000. Do confirm me the dispatch details so that i can pick up the package and get back my wallet soon.
hoping to see you soon and have a blast again.
Kind Regards,
Deepa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...s extremely memorable and overwhelming. it wouldnt have been better if you didnt t...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...xtremely memorable and overwhelming. it wouldnt have been better if you didnt took a le...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ing. it wouldnt have been better if you didnt took a leave for a week as well. this w...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... didnt took a leave for a week as well. this was one of the best vacation i have eve...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...so much with so much fun and frolic. Indeed we should often plan a holiday at each ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hoping
...ach others place to explore and unwind. hoping to see you soon at my place and allow m...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t and explore the city altogether. When i came back home with all the memorable t...
^
Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ave forgotten the wallet at your house. my wallet color is brown with brand name o...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...the wallet through mail at earliest. Im relieved with the fact that I forgot th...
^^
Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$10000'.
Suggestion: $10000
...tant cards, driving license and cash of $ 10000. Do confirm me the dispatch details so...
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Line 7, column 231, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...confirm me the dispatch details so that i can pick up the package and get back my...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hoping
...package and get back my wallet soon. hoping to see you soon and have a blast again....
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32547169811 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30565669851 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61320754717 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2470127552 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25902320866 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864182475475 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074324452518 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16067210381 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044340997786 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.