Any new technological development in the recent years is a boon or curse for the society in general
Technological advancements have deeply impacted societies in the last few years. While some people believe technology has negatives effects on human-beings, others believe it has contributed significantly to humans development. This essay will discuss why new technologies have positive impacts on people but sometimes present adversely affect individuals' life.
New advancements have expanded rapidly many problems in todays' societies which live dependent on it. Mental illnesses have dramatically increased around the world due to social media advent and keep achieving tremendous numbers. For example, Facebook clearly defines the degradation of people through fake profiles which lead people to hurt themselves believing they are not perfect. Societies have been profoundly affected by the development of technologies.
On the other hand, human race development has been rapidly expanded by the creation of new advancements which helps people to live more. For instance, its active involvement in medical advancements which prolong life expectancy in many countries around the world. Advanced technology has been invented for the evolution of human beings on earth.
This essay discussed how mental health has been achieving higher outcomes through new advancements and the negative effect on communities. In view of the outline of the arguments above, technological advancements have positive outweigh on the life of people which keep their evolution dependent on technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9023255814 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05881060813 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7988627673 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.75 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15038271172 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668520824863 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038722677591 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987577105336 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256492997277 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 53.1260098522 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.64 11.5310837438 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.