Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
traffic jam is becoming serious issue these days some people think that authorities should build more public transport 2 to cope up with this problem whereas others think its solution lies in building more roads
Firstly most of the people are working so they have to commute daily to their workplaces each and every person have their own vehicles which enables them to reach the destination easily and within time building roads can solve this problem significantly for instance in my city traffic congestion was a serious problem but after the lay down of new overbridges in the city people got relief from this problem As Long route vehicles passes over bridge so it become easier for local people to commute
On the other hand people rarely prefer to commute public transport because there is lot of crowd in the public buses and trains there is no space to sit comfortably investing more money can solve the problem of traffic congestion but to some extent only as people prefer to commute by their own vehicles because they find it difficult to wait for public transport
In a nutshell public transport can solve this problem only up to some extent where as building new roads would be better solution combat this problem
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Suggestion: Traffic
traffic jam is becoming serious issue these day...
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...its solution lies in building more roads Firstly most of the people are working s...
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...route vehicles passes over bridge so it become easier for local people to commute On...
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...ecome easier for local people to commute On the other hand people rarely prefer t...
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...t difficult to wait for public transport In a nutshell public transport can solve...
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...lve this problem only up to some extent where as building new roads would be better solu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, whereas, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83412322275 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30703968555 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559241706161 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 211.0 20.2975951904 1040% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1020.0 106.682146367 956% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 211.0 20.7667163134 1016% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 69.0 7.06120827912 977% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182814262813 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182814262813 0.084324248473 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131444093068 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748165096366 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 106.8 13.0946893788 816% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -134.23 50.2224549098 -267% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 84.4 11.3001002004 747% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.21 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.65 8.58950901804 194% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 86.4 10.1190380762 854% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 10.7795591182 510% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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