Early childhood is seen as a period in which most of the intellectual development of a child happens. Parents send their children to several classes and actvities to make the most of this period? Do you think engaging the child in so many activities has more advantage or disadvantage.
These days, we all are faceing top challenge in our daily life and we always try to win that challenge. Our upcoming generation does not trouble with that kind of things so as a parents we should provide all kinds of facilities through extra classes. I will explain the key point of my instance with the help of supporting argument and instance.
To begin with, I can offer variety of argument to support my point of view. Foremost among this child development occur during childhood period at that time if we provide extra class children gain that things rapidly and also apply in their daily life. It is important that school student should take extra class for their ,mental as well as physical health. A primary example of taking extra class are my daughter is study in grade three she is taking dance class. Now she is the best dancer of her school.
Another pivotal aspect of my point of view are extra activities also make student more burden and also energy loss but all this things are managed if parents take care about daily routine and children diet. Another example are all student are going school of six hour a day and remaining day from that hours one hour is separate for extra class. This way we take care of our child by giving healthy diet.
Finally, after taking aforementioned point in to consideration from my personal prospective I am inclined to believed that childhood is the period of child development during this period we should take care of our child by every thing including diet, exercise, extra activities and others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...are all student are going school of six hour a day and remaining day from that hours...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, well, kind of, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 20.9802955665 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71691176471 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37919350686 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544117647059 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.396326873 50.4703680194 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.916666667 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167034640605 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606918364313 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705496432014 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11347967753 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629705425878 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.