Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists rather than local people.
Why is this?
What can be done to encourage local people to visit museums and historical
Undoubtedly, historical places have always been a major destination for tourists and not the indigenes of a place. This is because of the expensive entrance fees charged and monotonous atmosphere of heritage sites, and certain possible measures can be used in attracting local people.
A major factor discouraging indigenes from exploring museums is the entry fee charged. In other words, most tourists are eager to learn new cultures and traditions unlike dwellers who have learnt either through personal experience or at school, and as such are willingly pay any amount to view this unique ornaments and artefacts already known to the locals. Additionally, most locals avoid visiting these place repeatedly because of the boring atmosphere. In other words, they become familiar with the unique antiques in heritage sites and would rather keep away until a new discovery is found,whereas these visitors find this place exciting and informative as this will enable them have a better understanding of the history and cultural heritage of the country.
That said, subsidizing fees and organising regular exhibitions can encourage local visits. Likewise, providing free tickets or conducting special monthly promos such as art gallery competitions can encourage regular out turn of locals. Moreover, promoting cultural events in Museum centres such as world discovery day in New Zealand can also help the community celebrate the unique aspect of their nation thereby solving the problem of low turnout.
In conclusion, the exorbitant admission fees of Heritage sites and monotonous atmosphere are major reasons why these centres have less local representatives and subsidizing fees and encouraging cultural event at these centers can help promote local visit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, likewise, moreover, so, well, whereas, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62453531599 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84489861474 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620817843866 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.5987113295 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.3 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246204439439 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912212542941 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469078352316 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146320744627 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284817120421 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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