Today, most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they were younger
Is it a positive or negative development in your own opinion?
To what extent do you support this development?
Nowadays, majority of individuals marry and have babies in their thirties rather than at younger age. Although I believe this is a positive development because of some advantages such as, career growth and financial freedom, the contentious issue of infertility is a cause for concern, and for this reason, I entirely disagree with this development.
Late marriage and birth are beneficial to the couples in some ways. First and foremost, the couples will be able to develop their career path. Before marriage, there would be enough time to focus on academic career which may define the path to success. A final point to consider relates to financial freedom. Since the individuals might have been able to acquire jobs and establish their positions in the labour market, they may have steady income which would serve as source of finance for the family. For instance, most of my colleagues at Lanny Exports Limited who developed their careers for three decades before marriage claimed they could afford the financial responsibilities. That is to say, marrying around the age of thirties is quite positive.
However, a female could have difficulties giving birth in her thirties due to infertility. Actually, as a woman grow older, her chances of getting pregnant reduces. Afterall, science has proven that most females' reproductive organs are usually more fertile at younger age. Now, of what benefit will it be for an individual to get married and, perhaps, not give birth?
In conclusion, despite the fact that getting married in the thirties will enable the couples take their time to execute the career plans, infertility is a risk that cannot be taken. In my opinion, late marriage is a positive development but I completely disagree with it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 403, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... couples are grown-ups and experienced, the tend to build an harmonious relationship and...
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Line 7, column 421, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...-ups and experienced, the tend to build an harmonious relationship and a long-stan...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, in short, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08955223881 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69089204126 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549253731343 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8987471347 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.25 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195986354277 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537389964621 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572981175273 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142292948205 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828515554875 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.