A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear john,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and to the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to thankyou for agreeing on home sitting for me when I will be going to Newyork for one week.
You can contact me on my official number which is 401-401-4101 as I will not be allowed to use my personal phone during those days. I am mentioning few responsibilities for you and I am sure that you will handle them very nicely. First of all give cat-food to my cat twice a day and give her a bowl of milk in the evening. I am sure that she will not disturb you much and keep playing with her toys.
Also mentioning few household duties such as watering my plants daily so that they do not wither. Keep the outside light on every night for the safety reason and dispose the garbage to nearby dumpster if required. I have stocked enough ration for a week, but still if you need something specific, you can shop from nearby convenience store. Feel free to use any thing at my house just as yours and I wish you a comfortable stay.
I hope you enjoy stay at my house even in my absence. Once again thankyou for your kind favor.
Warm Regards
Harry
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-10 | Prabhjot Kaur Bhullar | 84 | view |
| 2019-08-24 | bhatvishal@ | 73 | view |
| 2019-06-15 | harmankaur | 73 | view |
| 2019-06-15 | harmankaur | 73 | view |
| 2019-06-15 | harmankaur | 70 | view |
- You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he / she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:1. say why he / she would not enjoy going to college2. 78
- Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations, while others believe they should get one long vacation. Give the advantages of both and express your own point of view. 56
- Some people believe that in order for a hobby to be enjoyable, it needs to be difficult in some way.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- In your opinion what has been the most significant transportation innovation of the past 200 years 92
- First impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing the position. To what extent do you agree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...much and keep playing with her toys. Also mentioning few household duties such as...
^^^^
Line 7, column 359, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...rby convenience store. Feel free to use any thing at my house just as yours and I wish yo...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29411764706 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33470131817 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62443438914 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2666405855 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245590586214 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807138773864 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511889513413 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152976824943 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256759988404 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.