Every year several languages die out. Some people think thatthis is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on usability of minor languages. While some people argue that it is better to narrow down the language options available, on my pont of view I strongly agree with that statement. In this essay, I shall discuss on the actors strengthening my point of view while anallyzing both sides of it.
First and foremost, there are myriad of advantages of less number of language options such as effective and efficient communication, confidentiality and intergrity. For example, the Welsh language is becoming a minority language in Wales, because majority of the Welsh people are migrating to other parts of the country for better prospectus. In addition, the younger generation prefers to use globalized languages such as English. If we have limited optons of languages there will be minimal possibilities for miscommunication, with less number of conflicts as well. Therefore, linguistic studies will not be an important subject in the near future.
On the other hand, the interpreters and translators would lose their studies, meanwhile the national and cultural identity will deteriorate over the period of time. For instance, constitution of Sri Lanka has recognized three official languages, consequently there is a huge demand for the people who work as interpreters and translators. However, in some circumstances it is important to take conservative measures on some languages since it has been used in writing important documents which is used for further development.
On conclusion, it is recommended to operate with less number of languages to make the the lives of the users easier. It is believed, that governments can encourage people to learn globalized languages by facilitating with sufficient resources and funds such as trained teahers and materials.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ural identity will deteriorate over the period of time. For instance, constitution of Sri Lank...
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Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...e with less number of languages to make the the lives of the users easier. It is believ...
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Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...e with less number of languages to make the the lives of the users easier. It is believ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41114982578 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19096808399 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581881533101 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4414259667 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.461538462 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248725501341 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835987169332 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439435597759 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14170633646 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335487762787 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.