Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
When confronting a bad situation, people’s views may vary on whether to accept it or try to improve it. From my perspective, it is necessary to try to change the situation with confidence and courage instead of unwillingly accept it.
Some people contend that accepting it is better than changing. They argue that situation can be temporary, not permanent. For example, shortage of money may appear after people buy a TV at the shopping center or just purchase a washing machine. This situation won’t last long until they get paid next month. Besides, job satisfaction hinges greatly on their salary. People will get promoted maybe after several years with higher salary and then they will be satisfied with their jobs. Therefore, there is no need to worry about the job and this bad situation can disappear naturally over time.
However, others maintain that trying to improve the bad situation is necessary. Firstly, we have no idea when the bad situation will automatically disappear. If people have few opportunities to get promoted because of poor management of the boss, then changing the job can outweigh staying in the same company in hope of being selected by the manager. Secondly, under much pressure, workers have to solve the problems of lacking money quickly so as to pay for other household expenses. For example, when lacking in money due to the purchase of a new house, people need to work harder to support the family, such as doing part-time jobs after work. Besides, some bad situations may exert negative impacts if not addressed in time. An unsatisfactory job may indicates losing confidence and hope and frustrating the motivation. Although it seems not severe, this situation may lead to people losing hope of life. Hence, it is necessary and crucial to handle the bad situation.
All in all, although a bad situation may not be as severe as some people consider, in my opinion it is critical to change it and take measures if necessary. We need to be decisive when choosing to resign due to unsatisfaction and think up more solutions to the shortage of money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96600566572 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77692076079 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543909348442 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.238958095 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.65 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.65 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234035342607 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072096640249 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527339307426 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141796481928 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350362157616 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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