Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
The world is changing drastically, today we are facing more environmental issues, increasing population and providing quality education. In this essay, we will be talking about where my country stands in the next decade with respect to these changes.
I am from Pakistan, in my country every year we face environmental change. Increasing pollution resulting in climate change is the main reason behind this. Every coming year weather will be unpredictable summers will get hotter, rising temperature. Winters will be colder, dropping temperatures. On the other hand, the increase in population if we look at the statistics, in the last 10 years the population has grown immensely. From the year 2000 – 2010 the increase had been recorded 14% and the year 2010 – 2020 estimated increase is 18%. The more population grows the more issues communities must face, in developing countries. The increase in population is directly proportional to the education system. The quality of public funded schooling is below the mark which means in the coming 10 years this needs to be improved
Governments need to jump in and take the hold of environmental issues, should stop industries from producing carbon footprint and impose heavy fines on any violation. The increase in the rapid population and the effects it is bringing on our economy should be made clear to people. If the required ministry of health and education should sit together and suggest one child policy like China.
In conclusion, I must say awareness is the key element to success. Governments should put more emphasis on awareness to people by advertisements or through social work, etc.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, in conclusion, talking about, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17910447761 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90266851668 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600746268657 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.1337933899 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248865974956 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812934423606 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638431919691 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129738311668 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10144937813 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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