Some people think that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food, clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decision about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that give freedom choosing every day matters give rise to be an individualist person, other believe it is necessary for children are given opportunity to everything matters which will be affected to them freely. While the former nation seems to be considered for selfish character reason and the latter one will be trained as a prompt decision maker in the future.
On the one hand, by giving opportunities for youngsters to determine their daily life matters lead completely will lead to be a selfish character as well as anti-social . If the person having a selfish character, they seems to ignorant to other’s obstacles and concerns because they would carry about themselves first. For instance , in the one family their youngest child always insist on watching his favorite programs on television , he does not care whether the rest of family like those shows or not. However, I believe that the majority people the one who have the chance choosing every matters are considered as quick decision creator.
On the other hand, granting children to determine every matters that will impact to them such as food that they would eat , determining school where they eager to learn , and garment they would wear will cultivated them to be prompt decision maker. This character which is built up will be really beneficial for them in the long run especially when they are in facing any obstacles because they will learn to take responsibility every choices that they have taken. In addition , A research had successfully proved that parents who train their child create decision independently from the early age could bring successful to their child in upcoming years because of a good and fast decision maker are required in the work places nowadays
In conclusion, it is essential for people caring with other people obstacle and needs and trying to aid them, but is also important to be good as well as fast decision maker. It is imperative for parents to educate their child having empathy to others as well as creating prompt decision in every circumstances they will face up later on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97727272727 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64685403305 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528409090909 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.1512623239 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.2 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133035700973 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592577879822 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368906278091 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918195292476 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284629340663 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.