Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying.
This is a very important concept to discuss that people would normally ignore. University is a place where students from different places come together to learn and exploit their potential in whichever field they choose to study. In today's world, this is one of most neglected aspect of the education. Parents would want their children to go to rep[uted universities but never do they consider asking their children whether they are interested in that particular field or not.
I strongly agree with the concept of granting students the permission to take up the courses that excite and encourage them to work hard. It is the tradition, that has been followed since ages, in which a set of subjects are alloted to the students and each and every student have to study the same set of subjects which harming the progress and process of eevry students mind in a different way.
Consider the examples of various different scientists, had they focussed on every single subject of their course, none of them would have come up eith great discoveries and technologies. It is because they devoted their energy and time to a single aspect of the subject which sparked interest in them that made them so great.
Psychological studies prove that every person has different set of skills and talents and forcing a person to do what he is not good at will eventually damage his or her potential and mental energy.
Bill Gates, one of the greatest technologist of the world was a drop out of college because he never understood the reason of studying the subjects that he is not inetersted in. There are several examples of gerat personalities who had set examples of studying the subject that inspired and motivated them.
Another important aspect that should be considered is proper guidance of the students. It is quite common in today's world that students in hgih school will not have their interests figured out yet. Mentorship and proper counselling plays a major role in solving this problem. Universities should take a psychological and mental strength test in order to categorise the students and help them figure out their career choices.
In a nutshell, it is high time that Universities start counselling the students and making sure they are studying the subjects that motivates them in order to let them make the most of their potential.
- "Because the future will be dominated by technology, we must make four years of computer programming mandatory for all high school students. If our students take these classes, they’ll all be able to get high-paying programming jobs and lead fulfil 55
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 75
- skateboard users within the central plaza have caused a decrease in the sales of the stores in the plaza. a lot of littering is also observed. hence the city should prohibit skateboarding inside the plaza. 83
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 50
- Discussing controversial topics with those with contrasting views is not useful because very few people change their mind when questioned about their core beliefs 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 395.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93670886076 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65746342234 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501265822785 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.22892097 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.875 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6875 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6875 5.21951772744 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187746639866 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606851376658 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577832330317 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842480435573 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621862925704 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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