Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days the salaries of sport professionals are much higher than those of people in other professions. Some believe that it is right and completely fair, while there are others who think that this is an unjustified issue. In my honest opinion, I believe that it is unfair and other professions should have the same revenue as sport professionals. This essay will discuss both sides of view.
On the one hand, some claim that athletes in all fields of sports should earn much money and this is their right. In other words, because of sports stars are under too much pressure for have brilliance perform, they deserve higher salaries. In addition to this, they are highly skilled persons who bring name and fame for the country and also their fans, people and country expect them to always achieve the best as they can and never disappoint them. these talented men and women have heavy to train every single day and cannot eat everything that want because their bodies must be on fit until the end of their professional life, which is not permanent for them, so they have right to earn money for supporting their future life and retiring period. David Beckham is a prime example, who is a talent and famous soccer player that has a lot of fans all around the world. He had to be the best in soccer and made his fans satisfied, and based on this reason, he deserved high salaries for his effort.
On the other hand, there are other profession such as teaching and medicine which are even more important that sport, and people who are expert in these fields don’t earn money equal to the value of services that they prevent to society. These professionals should earn high salary, because of their valuable services, but it is not the case. For example, a doctor who was studying, graduated from university and then have a heavy duty to community for the health, treatment of people and save life of patients but the salary of a doctor is less than a soccer player in national team.
Finally, in my opinion, the role of some professions such as doctor is more vital for a society, and have a high annual income can be a motivation for doing better their duties with more responsibilities.
In conclusion, there are many professions in each country that are necessary, although some of them have a vital role and the same salaries as sports stars is important and completely fair.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, then, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2056.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89523809524 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.55375308621 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495238095238 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.373057589 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.066666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293120291309 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105996347387 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061234875122 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1666219338 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901617717113 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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