Some doctors think people are not getting enough exercise these days. Why is this? and what can be done about it?
Nowadays most doctors believe that people are not getting enough exercise. It is occurring mainly due to execessive use of electronic gadgets and inaccessibility of gyms and sports clubs. This essay will discuss the possible solutions of this disturbing trend.
To begin, with development in information technology, elctronic gadgets such as mobile phones, laptops, and televisions have become quite common. Therefore, people like to spend their free time on social media rather than playing sports or doing physical activities. In the USA, for example, use of electronic devices is higher as compared to developing countries and so is obesity. Furthermore, most residential communities do not have proper gyms or sports clubs; as a result, people do not get enough opportunities to play sports or do exercise.
To solve this issue the government and the public will have to act together. Firstly, people should take an initiative to reduce the use of social media and prepare a weekly schedule for sports and other physical activities; for example, a daily morning or evening walk can be helpful to improve the physical fitness. Moreover, the government should allocate funds and resources to build gymnasia and sports centers in every residential community. Take the example of Norway, where appartment buildings are required to allocate some space for gym equipment. In this way, people can get opportunities to get exercise.
In conclusion, people are not getting enough exercise, due to lack of time and facilities. This problem can be solved, if the government provides the facilities and people allocate time for exercise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 328, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36186770428 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90101763946 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56420233463 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9319780675 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201923134047 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081334287861 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827674437642 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141761750148 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530673701041 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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