People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
I absolutely agree with the statement. Human nature is quite interesting when it comes to decision making. people who make decisions based on their emotions mostly regret later for not being sensible. Emotion in itself is a huge thing to understand that most people ignore. The people who react and make decisions based on their emotions usually lack critical thinking and patience. in order to elaborate it and to make it more understandable, I would like to give an example. suppose someone spoke to you in a very harsh and rude manner in front of other professionals and you got offended and replied him back in the same manner. this clearly shows that you don't have enough patience to understand the reason behind his manner of speaking. Such situations occur in our daily life and if we don't think before we take the decision we would commit tons of mistakes each day. Hence in order to conclude, I would certainly agree for the above-mentioned statement as one should think twice before taking a decision. the fact that emotions change every now and then but the decision that you took might stay with you forever. we might emotionally feel something different for something after 10 years than what we feel about it now.
one has to think with proper logic and make a decision as the world wouldn't be the same place if people start making decisions based on their emotions.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-28 | AC1990 | 58 | view |
| 2020-01-19 | lcosenza | 54 | view |
| 2019-12-29 | mrigimunjal | 50 | view |
| 2019-12-25 | likhithae | 50 | view |
| 2019-12-22 | yashincontrol | 50 | view |
- Claim: In order to help small businesses thrive, government should play a minimalrole in private business matters. 66
- Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying. 54
- Men and women due to the differences in their physical strengths are supposed to carry different tasks. 66
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate 54
- Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weathe 42
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...sting when it comes to decision making. people who make decisions based on their emoti...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 384, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ly lack critical thinking and patience. in order to elaborate it and to make it mo...
^^
Line 1, column 478, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Suppose
...dable, I would like to give an example. suppose someone spoke to you in a very harsh an...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 633, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...nd replied him back in the same manner. this clearly shows that you dont have enough...
^^^^
Line 1, column 661, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ame manner. this clearly shows that you dont have enough patience to understand the ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 793, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...tions occur in our daily life and if we dont think before we take the decision we wo...
^^^^
Line 1, column 875, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...would commit tons of mistakes each day. Hence in order to conclude, I would certainly...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 1013, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...d think twice before taking a decision. the fact that emotions change every now and...
^^^
Line 1, column 1043, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...decision. the fact that emotions change every now and then but the decision that you took might st...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 1122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...t you took might stay with you forever. we might emotionally feel something differ...
^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
... years than what we feel about it now. one has to think with proper logic and make...
^^^
Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
... logic and make a decision as the world wouldnt be the same place if people start makin...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 2235.4752809 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 240.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75833333333 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.535580144 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608333333333 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2987167019 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.8461538462 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343039288188 0.243740707755 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127411814671 0.0831039109588 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135727026272 0.0758088955206 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330674494183 0.150359130593 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610186860642 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 100.480337079 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.