Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinions
Hardships are part and parcel of life and everyone has their ways to deal with it. A few people accept unfavourable situations such as low-income or unsatisfactory jobs whereas others endeavour to make these circumstances better. In my opinion, one should always look for an opportunity to thrive in life.
Those who believe in surrendering to the discontented life situations advocates that the other dependent members of family could suffer enormously if the efforts to improve living standards went in the wrong direction. Moreover, enduring tough times is considered best option especially if there is only one breadwinner in the family. In addition to this, many people compare themselves to others whose sufferings are worse than them and silently accept their situations
Others, however, myself included, highlight that one should always work towards the betterment of life. They feel that success is synonymous to taking risks. A good example of this is Amitabh Bacchan, a world renowned bollywood actor, son of a banker, who made up his mind to leave for allahabad to resume his old life after 13 unsuccessful films and pathetic film career. However, he decided to give it a one last shot and the rest is history.Thus, I think that an individual should make massive efforts to upgrade their life qualities.
To reiterate, there are mixed views on the ways to deal with the tough circumstances in life. I believe that struggling to ameliorate these situations can work wonders in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'considered the best'.
Suggestion: considered the best
...tion. Moreover, enduring tough times is considered best option especially if there is only one ...
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Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...a one last shot and the rest is history.Thus, I think that an individual should make...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, whereas, i think, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17213114754 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88636341994 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635245901639 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9912757963 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.727272727 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145527894351 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519846544944 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061618776471 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890697853277 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584891169753 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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