life today is easier or 50 years ago?
Although life, when our grandparents were children, was healthier and less stressful, some people believe that life today has better expectancy and more advanced. In my point of view, life today is way easier and better than before, due to we have access to better healthcare, more technology, and safer transportation.
Firstly, when my grandparents were children the healthcare system was primitive. Not only because, the number of hospitals were limited, but also lots for medical devices have not been inenvted yet. In the last 50 years scientists made major advances that have revolutionized healthcare. For example, in 1960 saw the development of the first artificial heart, and surgeons attempted the first human liver and heart transportation. Consequently, the improvement that occurred in the medical filed increase the access to care and improve the quality of life.
Next, in the past the world was so different. Given that the technological invention such as internet, world has reduced to a global village. In Europe, statistic shows the people all over the world can communicate 70% easier and quicker than before. Moreover, internet is very important for education; coupled with opening doorways to a wealth of information, opportunity to learm beyond the classroom internet improves the quality of education. Therefore, technology made our life more convenient and enjoyable than my grandparents’ life.
Finally, transportation is safer and faster now than it was when my grandparents were children. Study done by American National transportation Association found that public transportation has been improved in the last 40 years. In addition to that cars now have lots of options makes them more luxury and convenient. As a result, life today is more interesting than before.
Taking everything into a consideration, without a doubt life today is easier than it was when my grandparents were children, it is suggested that
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ents were children, it is suggested that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43092105263 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16561385248 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569078947368 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9097453029 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1176470588 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204596398641 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627597934321 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737797631394 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121134135575 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592714666743 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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