Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crime of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in socelitey.to what extend do you agree or disagree?
By developing cities and extending population, authorizes have special concertation for regulation which can control the violence and criminal in the city. The result of this decision leads to decreasing violence, arrange the society and variety of regulations. In this essay discuss disagree and agree about capital punishment.
many people from developed countries strongly believe that having organized condition for society is a vital factor. It helps improve the community .however, lack of rules should be done by people and governments. To make complete this point, approximately half of 50% of people in China tend to maintain the busy street in rush hour in the capital city.it is essential to say that, if all aspects of law had approved in every country, we definitely would have made progress to decrease the offensive behavior of people. And being organized has been famous these days.
Some critics have a focus on the subject that, the law has been complicated these days. In the developing countries, lack of knowledge about international management of the UN and another country leads to the organizations has own rules for themselves. And, following the rules insist other organizations obey the same structure. Although the laws require to reshape again to enhance time and facilities
In conclusion, individuals and organization under government look should have obeyed the rules for keeping modern society from bad behavior, however, it needs to decrease the problem for avoiding complicated law for everyone.
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Message: Did you mean 'reshaping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 240.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41666666667 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90382888997 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.9233003489 48.9658058833 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.181818182 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0647983544048 0.236089414692 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028004158462 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511044433997 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0449111490608 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602786414795 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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