Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behaviour. If sporting events cause antisocial behaviour, can team sports really be good for us?
Sports always endorse or give a lesson to their audience to be fit in their life and resemble a positive character. Incidentally, It has been observed that some of these sporting events take a bad shape due to hooliganism between two teams followers. Consequently, It represents alienated behavior which is not a good sign for the growth of sports. This essay will discuss about the benefits of team sports with examples.
There is an incidence of violence and destruction between followers of the team noticed post-match. Supporters won't be able to digest the loss of the team they support and hence it induces them to initiate violence. For example, In soccer history, Followers of two clubs of the English Premier league namely Manchester United and Chelsea are very violent by nature because they cannot see their teams to be at the losing side.
Sports do not give us a lesson to act inhuman or behave wildly. It always teaches us to be competitive, fit and shows always good characters in any circumstances of our life. For example, Real Madrid team players of Spanish La league show a real example of sportsmanship in Europa final league when they lost with the very smaller ranking team.
In conclusion, Sports teach us the lesson that in any situation of our life we should not lose our hope and be calm and compassion similarly players show their behavior in the big matches like the final of the world cup because this is the winning mantra in the big event.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, incidentally, similarly, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81568627451 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63121182409 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58431372549 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3851415871 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.636363636 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200996119294 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790721704236 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506739468876 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11961632278 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538442264057 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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