Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays we are living in a world where the Internet is regarded as a convenient tool and take control of a huge amount of areas in life. It is commonly believed that there this no need to operate museums or art galleries as people can search for information about historical objects on the Internet. This essay will explain the reasons for my argument against this statement.
First of all, the computer has no ability to replace museums or art galleries due to the fact that information about historical objects on the Internet is not trustworthy and reliable enough. There may be accurate information mixed with unofficial information updated on websites that make viewers confused. Since the information and images about historical objects are not adequate on the Internet, people cannot gain an in-depth understanding of things they concern in. In addition to this, only visiting museums and art galleries directly will give you the real and vibrant experience about history, which the Internet cannot give to you. Visiting museums is also an effective method to learn more about life in ancient times, witness the antiques from the past and pay homage to their priceless price.
Secondly, museums and art exhibitions play an essential role because they offer job opportunities for workers. The staff forces have made a great contribution to the preservation of objects displayed in the museums. If we close the museums, those workers will be out-of-work and leave the financial burden to society.
Thirdly, museums and art galleries are also a form of promotion for the tourism industry. Many foreigners have the demand for discovering more about the culture of the nation they come. Therefore, museums will be ideal destinations to satisfy that demand.
To conclude, I am of the opinion that we should not remove the museums and art galleries as those places provide a variety of benefits that the Internet cannot bring to us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12578616352 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73601532062 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562893081761 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2703830948 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276698803801 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090631926811 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758003600506 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145357702167 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313530294317 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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