You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
• say how your work could be done while you are away
• ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Dr.wiliam,
I am writing to ask you for permission to working at our headquarter office in Tehran. I would like to work for a period of at last 6 months in the head office which in my idea, can be considered as a valuable experience. As you know, recently, I have prompted to an upper position which includes several different and professional activities. I think, attending at our head office provides me a great opportunity to use my skilled colleague experiences. Taking part in different sessions and close collaboration with other parts of the company such as mechanic and design, physic and chemistry will bring numerous benefits for me. I will learn about other critical tasks in the production process which would be effective and can lead to boost the efficiency, especially when there are many deadlines that are to be meted.
On the other hand, this opportunity can help me to improve my social interaction with other coworkers that we have never seen each other. Since most of the connections are via emails or cell phone, so have some interaction can result in more friendship between peers.
I am looking forward to hearing your positive approval.
Yours sincerely,
Yalda Asgari.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 298, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...ted to an upper position which includes several different and professional activities. I think, a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, i think, such as, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99504950495 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85418687328 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668316831683 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.1108447114 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.9 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18934600251 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074617259931 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779016934519 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902612337293 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929899488581 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.