Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
In today's time and age, its imperative to be aware of your beliefs and statements. In my view, we have observed an intellectual evolution in our society that has guided us to harmonize as humans and leap beyond the wall created by the diabolical differences amongst us. As much as this change has brought in our society the respect every person regardless of their age, race or sex deserves, this social corrected-ness at times have taken away from us the sense of the implications of the inherent differences between masses of say, different age groups or to highlight the topic of the issue say, between different genders.
The biological differences between a man and a woman are what structured our ancient civilizations. The men were supposed to build houses whereas the woman made those houses homes. Talking beyond physical, scientists have been studying the human brain for far too long now and we have enough results to mark how different the brains of a female is from a male's. A woman can perform a number of tasks with an equal level of focus which is inherently very difficult for a male to do which is why in our ancient times the males started going outside their houses to do a specific job and the woman stayed in to take care of the house, which in itself involved a number of tasks altogether.
Strength is an umbrella term, and we cannot and should not be ordering different masses based on this term. The average muscle strength in males is much higher than that of females, and hence jobs which require a person to invest physically is in general, better suited for males. Similarly, the managerial and organizational skills that women have is much better than that of men and that kind of job is better suited for women.
We have come a long way as humans and today every person on this planet is aware of their capabilities, mental and physical. Men and women are walking in the world hand in hand, respecting each other's qualities. But the biological differences they have is obvious and just because say, a 15-year old kid can do fifty pushups and the 40-year old doctor may not be able to do so, they both are assets to the society in their own ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a male', 'a malis' or simply 'males'?
Suggestion: a male; a malis; males
...ifferent the brains of a female is from a males. A woman can perform a number of tasks ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, similarly, so, whereas, in general, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 388.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65206185567 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57198804218 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525773195876 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.3791405036 60.3974514979 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.846153846 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8461538462 23.4991977007 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138060507931 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473291630037 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429294393407 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832584433256 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365827756026 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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