A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
National school curriculum is one of the most important things that helps to shape the future of the students. It is one of the most important part of student`s life. student`s career depends upon their school curriculum.
In my view the school curriculum must not be same until they enter college because if school curriculum is same a student has to study a lot of things that is not required but them in their entire life. They have to focus on lot of things that they cannot focus in their strength. for example if a person wants to be a doctor in the future then he is interested in science from his childhood and there is no point in studying history.
Furthermore, if the curriculum is same they have to focus on a lot of things and they get boring and are diverted from their passion and instead of following his passion they doe something in which they wont be satisfied in their entire life and as a result of this they may suffer from mental problems like depression.
Lastly if school curriculum is same then children thought process will also be same and they will have same kind of people whose thought process ane not different and they wont be able to solve different kinds of problems. In order to tackle different kinds of problems we must have different people with different thought process. Because of this we will be able to solve different kinds of problems.
Therefore a nation must have different school curriculum to different students from their school level in order to make them follow their passion which will lead our society towards prosperity and happiness.
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... people with different thought process. Because of this we will be able to solve differ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, may, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, kind of, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 2235.4752809 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 280.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75714285714 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55817766373 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446428571429 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.3230049486 60.3974514979 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.090909091 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 5.21951772744 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235323230767 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094186305678 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080396234851 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135117375505 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569646171821 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 48.8420337079 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 100.480337079 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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