Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People communicate with each other less than in the past because of the popularity of television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
I totally agree, I feel that nowadays people has being talking fewer each other. Because, they are so busy watching: their favorite novel, maybe a movie, or even a TV newscast. That paying attention in what the “real people” are saying, it is not attractive anymore.
However, this lack of interest of the people to communicate, has caught the attention of researchers around the world. For instance, I was watching a Ted talk made by a Psychologist, she is showing the results of her research. She was trying to understood what happened that, people are spending their free time watching TV instead outcoming with friends and family. The short conclusion made by her, was that: this lack of communication has leading people to diseases like depression. She also mentions that, likely television was the guilty for this behaviour shift.
Unfortunately, kids are also being affected by this absence of communication. Some parents just put their children in front of TV, sometimes during all day and leave a kid being cared by television. For example, Daniel is the son of my best friend, he is 5 and got used spend a full-time watching TV. Currently, remove him from the front of television, could be a nightmare. As a result, he does not know exactly, how to play with other kids, how to start a conversation etc. This instinctive behaviour is being lost.
Currently, even the older people has being affected in a wrong way by television. An example of this is my mother A couple of days ago, I was talking with her about my first day at work. I was discussing the qualities of the new fellowship, how friendly my colleges has being, about a healthy food that I eat on lunch time etc. Actually, I was excited describing my new routine. Until, out of the blue, my mom starts talking about a character of the novel that she was watching. And I said: - Mom, Are you not paying attention on me?? Obviously, the answer was no! Because she was very focus by watching TV, that just do not realize that I was talking with her. Of course, I felt upset about it and unfortunately, this was not the first time that happened.
For those reasons, I feel that, our current society is getting used to talk less and watch more. Nevertheless, we need to struggle with this behavior, to change them while there is time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, of course, talking about, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71921182266 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74818772712 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554187192118 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9159698899 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.8333333333 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12130257012 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348865010795 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327834376986 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708188779468 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00908815678404 0.0645574589148 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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