Some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show that we care about them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A section of society asserts that the gifts and presents are indispensable to portray love and affection towards an individual, while others believe that there are various alternatives to gifts which are equally effective and convey the same message. I endorse the idea of using other means and methods to show compassion and care for the loved ones.
To begin with, one of the most common ways to impress your friends and family members is by presenting them with an invaluable gift which they can keep and remember for a long time. A well-thought-out item given as a present not only acts as a token of love but also symbolises a real relationship. If one offers a gift which is in accordance with the necessity of the taker, then it is evident that the presenter knows about the needs and wants of the person very well. For instance, when I needed a new suit for my graduation ceremony, my father was well aware of that and took the opportunity to gift me a new tuxedo on my 17th birthday.
Nevertheless, from an enlightened standpoint, offering even an expensive present only once is not adequate to build a strong connection or develop a relationship. To improve a relationship, one needs to devote enough time and be present in all kinds of situations, whether it is an occasion to celebrate or adversity. Furthermore, imparting knowledge and learnings from experience are still considered as a vital present. For example, every year, my grandmother used to tell anecdotes from her childhood, along with a handmade local dish, which used to be a profound and memorable gift for me.
To conclude, presents have the ability to express care and emotions for others, albeit, in my opinion, other abstract ways, such as spending time and inculcating knowledge, generate same feelings which can last for a longer period.
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- Most of the people in society enjoy watching crime movies and criminal TV programs Why do you think people have more interest to watch them What is the impact on society due to this 74
- Some people think that children who spend a lot of time reading children's story books are wasting their time which could be better used doing other more useful activities.To what extent do you agree? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 225, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...me feelings which can last for a longer period of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89137380192 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89836409867 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603833865815 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.4914459385 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.181818182 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4545454545 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3636363636 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147647897889 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564422507526 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045053218158 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907460226269 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412089088354 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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