The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Well for the development of sociecty, in accordance with peace and harmony requires a great leader who speaks for their people. As said by a great scholar "No one is a born leader, its the quality inculcated over time". A great leader is the one willing to sacrifice his needs for the betterment of others and is cooperative by listening to his people and understanding what they need. Although having a sence of cooperation is a necessary quality for a leader but not having competitive feeling's in them is something i would disagree with.
History has seen many great leaders across the globe, and clearly depits that a great leader is combination of both the qualities, if a leader is not competitive then it would be the case when every other peron would want to be a leader or vice versa, inspite the fact being that such quality is cherished only by a few. As a person who is competitive for there position is always concerend about his/hers people wellfare. For example Indian history has seen many kings ruling a kindgom they were cooperative towards their people at the same time they were competitive with the kings from diffrent kingdom which made them to work with more dedication towards there duties.
Maximum part of the world today is democratic, where people get to choose their own leaders by the process of election, in which multiple political parties comprising of many leaders compete for votes, and the one with highest number of votes win's.
For such a situation it is necessary for a leader to be competitive so that people may not elect the opponent leader.Similay is the case with industries and other fields if the leader is not cooperative with his/her fellow workers, then he is not worth being a leader. Secondly if he is not competitive in nature it would be difficult to compete in the market with the leaders from different industries, and if this is the case then industries development and growth is hampered.
Recently a article in the newspaper stated an incidence about a senior manager from a well reputed company got fired reason being he was not able to produce result as good as the other competitor companies, although the articel clearly mentioed about how cooperative he was with the other employees. Thus I would like to summarize by saing that, it is the willingness of a person a to person to be a leader and not something that one can be taught, also a great leader is a proper combination of both sence of cooperation and competition thus its better to prepare young people for leadership with both these qualities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ry other peron would want to be a leader or vice versa, inspite the fact being th...
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...ive with the kings from diffrent kingdom which made them to work with more dedica...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2148.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 446.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81614349776 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73378341478 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466367713004 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.0 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.6283010259 60.3974514979 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.0 118.986275619 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.1666666667 23.4991977007 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12785941034 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606059327762 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337678872242 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848581048219 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139667214345 0.0667264976115 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 14.1392134831 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.