Some people believe that increasing violence in the media is the cause of increasing violence in our society, especially among children. Others believe that children's peer groups and parental role models are a much more powerful influence on children's behavior.
Author claims that some folk believe that media plays a crucial role in the development of child whereas some believe that the "Genetics" plays a major role in the upliftment of the child.
According to my perspective Genetics plays a major role. Parents are the ingenuous teachers of anybody's life. In this modern treacherous world not a single human being is trustworthy. Parents plays a crucial role in child's development, they are the one's who creates the impact in a very streneous way, since they know the the character traits, they always think extraordinary for there beloved siblings.
Peer group also plays an astonishing role in improving behaviour, in peer pressure one becomes indolent or direct opposite of it, depending upon the grabing skills of the chld.
Take a senerio that a chid is not studying and is scoring few marks though his friends are scoring well enough. Due to this child feels dejected and thus the behaviour traits of the child change drastically. Now considering the situation if the peer group motivates the child and help him then it will be show more stringent effect and the outcome will be fruitful.
"Parents are creators, Next to God", though the world turns upside down the buttres they give is not not expressable. They are the one who can effectivley elicit every information without even asking since they know the child from birth, though there behaviour directly impacts the life of the child sometimes it can prove to be the reason of the child's abash behaviour because of imbalance in the marital affair. This can be more impactful and dangerous.
Though the role of media in improving behaviour can not be negllected. Now a days every child uses phone and in or the other way connected to the social media. The contents seen by the child determines or cultivates the behaviour traits in them sometime it can be noxious or deleterious.
According to me the growth the child is interdependent on both parents and media but major infulence being the parental guidance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, thus, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 341.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00586510264 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81139765852 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533724340176 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1014856393 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6875 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103258290829 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383221455274 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039973929274 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636779198857 0.150359130593 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416941422892 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.