Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Vast consideration from various countries government declare the particular succes is achieving a high rate in economic consistently. Meanwhile, several societies suggest that outside aspects also need to increase. Here, I will state the two topics in different illustrations.
It is normal if every notion has their special intention to encourage a wealthy of their state. Nevertheless, the financial, inflation, and monetery issues sometimes provide a paradoxical. Consequently, we can not blame if this would be an unfinished task. It also supplies the immense impact, for example, if the country contrived the perefect economic stability, the societies would not be sacrifice when they search for job. This is the effect of huge save for every company paying their salary. Yet, it obviously could establish the ideology of capitalism, where the richers would gain their circumstances and vice versa for the poor.
On the other hand, other people assume differently. A lot of them also determine the education field to level up netizens capability. Furthermore, they also argue that the more educated people of some nations, the more renown and powerfull those regions. Because, undoubtedly, individu with great degree such as masters, doctors, or even professors would provide more beneficial which can foster the situation, people divines, and also life beings. In another illustration, with an amazing knowledge, people can develop a business, upgrade technology, and vihicles like Bill Gates, Steve Jobs, and Jack Ma. They are the unforgetable influencers who have made life more valuable and easier.
To sum up, I personally stand for the equality of every aspect for country development, although the economic issue is undeniably the main point of people serenity.
- the diagrams below show the stages and aquipment used in the cement-making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. 78
- PUNISHMENT IN CRIME 73
- countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.do you think this is a positive or negative development? 84
- JOB SATISFACTION 56
- Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
Vast consideration from various countries government declare the particular succe...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
..., and monetery issues sometimes provide a paradoxical. Consequently, we can not blame if this...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'netizens'' or 'netizen's'?
Suggestion: netizens'; netizen's
...termine the education field to level up netizens capability. Furthermore, they also argu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50729927007 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95596331359 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675182481752 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3209985736 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0900272618764 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.029677731586 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304195936817 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0556617725726 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275966746988 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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