Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.
To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent years, information technology which is called IT is shifting a number of aspects of human life and it emerged in household, hobby and organisations. It is put forward by some people that it delivers some negative effects, however, I believe that there are more advantages far surpass disadvantages. This essay will identify the benefits outweigh the ill effects surrounding this issue before coming to a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with the drawbacks of IT industry, the most conspicuous one is perhaps that people are often exposed to incorrect information. In other words, it is disclosure to the public and anyone can share their own opinions and information. To illustrate, there are many cancer patients share information about treatment on the internet while there is numerous information that people experienced illegal or non-proved medications.
Despite the disadvantages, there are a number of advantages of it as well. one of the most convincing advantage is perhaps that people can acquire knowledge at home without enrolling to schools. This is evidenced by the fact that there are hundreds of resources and it costs cheap price or pays free. For instance, the IELTS webinar which provides free practice tests is used worldwide. Another point of benefits is it supports human limitation in a professional position. In other words, by the public information on the internet, crime scenes could be resolved. For example, some children who able to recognise the brand of cars in Korea found out the man who made an event of car crush when they watched a video map.
To sum up, it can be observed that there are both good effects and ill effects. To choose which side I am on, I believe that advantages far surpass disadvantages, owing to the reasons discussed above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17966101695 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92622295974 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9340080903 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.866666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0992999186526 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285116979488 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439852672838 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549996330185 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392793842205 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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